Best Friend
By Madaha, 10, London, UK
I want a friend that is trusting kind and very helpful and would play games with me and we would make new friends. (January 2005)
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My Sister
By Aimee, 9, Ivybridge, Devon, UK
My sister Alice is so much fun I know that she will always be my chum We play and we laugh We run and we hug Then we cuddle up on the sofa And drink cocoa from a mug (January 2005)
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Friendship
By Ajay, 9, London, UK
I would like a friend who plays with me who takes care about me who helps me. I wish I had a good friend not a friend who blames everything on me when we lose a game I get to be blamed. In this year my mum will buy a house with a garden, I'll go to a different school and make more friends. If my friends are nice to me I'll be nice back. (January 2005)
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My friend is very safe
By Faraha, 10, London, UK
My friends are really funny. My best friends are really kind, helpful, they are really funny. I don't like it when people back chat about me. (January 2005)
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Friends
By Lexi, 11, Canada
Friends by me everywhere I go never making fun of me never saying no, always by my side happy, sad , good or bad, friends for ever even when one goes. (January 2005)
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My Best Friend
By Lorna, 9, Belfast, N. Ireland
I have a best friend that was very close to me but now I never see her because I moved away. I moved school as well and it is very sad for me. Later in the year I will be moving back to her. My best friend is called Emma. Emma is nine just the same as me. In school we both would chase each other, we played hunting games as well. As I talk to her on the phone I tell her things that happen to me where I live. One day two weeks ago I told Emma that I was moving back to her school and she was so surprised. She sounded excited from then. A day before New Years I rang her up and asked her if she would tell me her email because I got a PC for Christmas .Emma told me that she would tell me her email the next day and when I get it I can talk to her across the internet. (January 2005)
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I want to cry
By LiYunShu, 12, Singapore
Yes, I'm a Chinese. During my holidays, I went back to China to improve my Chinese. My father settled me in a school, where my aunt is a teacher. My friends are so good to me. Now I'm back, I missed them so much and even cried today. I missed even the nastiest kid in class. I regret saying unkind words to them. Even writing letters can't help.When looking at their autographs, my vision just gets blurred by tears. It was sad to remember the time when I promised them I will return next year. Just a month with them, but that is just the same how I felt for my friends here.
I think friendship will not just fade as time passes by, or distance. Maybe thinking of this will help. (January 2005)
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My Best friend
By kayla, 10, Richmond Heights, Ohio, USA
When I was in 1st grade I got bullied by these girls. In second grade I became best friends with one of them, Cierra. Sometimes we would get into arguments like normal people but we would always makeup. So one day we got into a real bad argument, but we were still talking to each other, but I was getting an attitude with her at everything she was saying to me. Everyday she would tell me that she was moving and I would go behind her back and say yes! So one day I was absent from school and on that day she moved. When I came back to school we were walking to the classroom and my friend J told me that she had moved and I just bust out crying. So when we got to the classroom my teacher saw me crying and she knew how close we were. So then she sat everyone down and she told me that she was coming back. Now that I am in fifth grade I never seen her since this day. I dont have any contect with her. I miss her very much if I could I would hire a whole team of investigaters to find her for me maybe one day she will come back I am looking forward to that day. Thank you for letting me share my story it helped me let my feelings out. (January 2005)
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She's always there
By Hannah, 11, Hants., UK
She's my best friend because she stands up for me. I don't deserve anyone as nice as her, but she wouldn't want anyone different.
When In had my accident, she was the only one who came to visit me, all the others were scared they'd catch something. She cheered me up when I was down.
And I'm glad she chose me to be her best friend. (January 2005)
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Here for You
By Stormy, 13, San Antonio, Texas, USA
I may never understand the work that you must do, and I may never be as good in certain aspects as you but I'm always here for you.
No matter who likes you, the popular, the trends, for I'm here for you, no matter where you stand.
Our lives are very different, our lonely paths spread apart, but I'm always here for you, my friend. (December 2004)
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Stop
By Pen, 12, Nottingham, UK
I am too scared to go to school. My life is like a nightmare come true.
I once was popular but now am a dweeb Everything I say makes people pretend to feel sick.
Don't act like that Friends never do that. (December 2004)
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Doesn't It Stink?
By Rachel, 14, USA
Doesn't it just stink when a friend blows you off? You wish you could change this so you could get off to a better start. Don't you just hate it when a friend is dishonest with you? Inside you want to tell on them, because they make you feel oh so blue. Isn't it wrong when a friend tells your secret, and the hurt really does sting? You wish that God would make things better so again your heart could sing. But worst of all is setting a bad example, and doing all these things yourself. So be a good person and a great friend, and you'll never have to worry about any of this. (December 2004)
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I Miss You !!!
By Chloe, 11, Chelmsford, UK
I Miss You !!! The Summer Holidays just seemed to fly by , and I hadn't seen Jade since the last day of primary school . I can't get over the fact that I'll never see her again . She moved to Australia , and thats it. I just wish I could see her again !!! Jade , if you are reading this, PLEASE write to me ! Chloe (December 2004)
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BeSt FrIeNd
By Ashley, 16, SC, USA
I have a best friend that is the best in the world but some time I just don't know where we are. I mean, sometimes she is all moody but sometimes she's funny and a joy to be around but right she just don't know what she wants. I'm trying to be a good Best Friend and put up with her moody time but it's hard what should I do> (December 2004)
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Lucy Locket
By Kristy, 8, Hebburn, UK
I've got a friend called Lucy. Most people call her Lucy Locket. Her favourite hobbie is dancing and her favourite sport is football like mine. We both support the same football team (Sunderland YeaH!) She likes playing in her room with her dolls or bratz. When I sleep over she always spreads out like a star and I fall out of bed. She likes cleaning the bathroom with me and all sorts. She is in year one and is nearly six. Lucy Locket is always sharing and being kind. Here is a song that me and her sister sings. Lucy Locket lost her pocket kitty fisher found it; But ne'er a penny was there in't, exept the binding round it. Lucy always joins I when we get to her. She has got a dog called Tilly and sometimes we use her as a guard dog. (December 2004)
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Don't know what to do!
By Devon, 12, Dover, UK
I have two frinds K and S. I hang around with S until S and K split up then they both want to hang around with me. What should I do? I can give advice to other people but can't sort myself out. (December 2004)
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My best friend and her talents
By Nicola, 10, St.Helens, Merseyside, UK
Leah is my best friend. She has always been there for me if I was sad or got hurt. I got bullied last year and she stood by my side and stuck up for me even though she got called too. She is pretty, clever and is better than the year 6 boys in our class. She is my friend because I trust her and she trusts me too. (December 2004)
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Friends forever (Song)
By Nicola, 10, St.Helens, Merseyside, UK
1st Verse: When you're down or feeling blue, I'll be there for you. You're the best friend I've had, Now I'll help you if you're down or sad.
Chorus: Friends, friends forever, I'll always be there for you. Friends friends forever, Even if we meet somebody new.
2nd Verse: I'll care for you in every way, No matter what people do or say. Our friendship will always be true, Because I believe in you.
Chorus: Friends, friends forever, I'll always be there for you. Friends, friends forever, Even if we meet somebody new.
3rd Verse: You're the one in my dreams, No matter what anything seems. Will we be together forever, Because I think you're pretty and really clever.
Oh oh oh yeah, You're the best friend I've ever had, You're the best friend, The best friend, I could ever have. (December 2004)
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Friends Forever
By Michele, 13, Frederickburg, VA, USA
You and Me Me and You You dont know what you've gotten me though
We met only nearly a year ago and yet we have become so close we are like one person we complete each other we wouldnt be the same with out the other by my side through by your side through by ours sides through Thick and thin
We have helped each other though many teary nights all the many painful break ups and just the pains of life
When all we wanted was to disappear when everything taunted us constantly.
When our families got all screwed up we were there for each other Never forgetting one another
We may go through many arguments but we will always make it through never leaving each other for long
Making plans for the future hoping to still be together hoping to be friends forever our friendship will never be over!
New friends may come along but we will both belong never leaving the other to be alone as we have shown many of times
We are best friends till the end and no one and there stupid thoughts can ever change that Not even us we will always come back to be with each other...... (Dec 2004)
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Holiday Break up!
By Rebecca, 9, Skelmersdale, UK
When I came back over the holidays, things had just passed me by, all of my friends, playing tag, then two went and why?
A selfish person played, a selfish person lied, and do you know what for, to get friends on side!
It still hasn't been sorted, but happened way back now, we are all back but as 4, used to be 3 then 1 joined wow! (November 2004)
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