The Cupboard
By Tiffany, 10

It was a scorching hot day and I was playing hide and seek with my cousins Rebecca, Jodi, April and David. Rebecca was on at counting and we were hiding. I hid in the cupboard. She had been looking for me for about an hour she screeched at the top of her voice "I GIVE UP!!!" But I couldn't hear her as I had fallen asleep.

When I awoke I found myself in my room Rebecca found me. Except I was not on because she recognised me last. David was on. I hid in the cupboard again. But this time I had fallen to sleep and I fell through the back of the cupboard. I opened my eyes and found myself on a beach. The beach was lovely. I turned around but there were palm trees.

It was an island…

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