By Matthew, 11

It was a totally normal morning, and my mother took me to town. We had been to many shops like Argos and Woolworths.

Out of my beady eye .I saw a sign saying “create your own coffin “. As I approached the door I saw many different kinds of coffin like ones the shape of skips, mini wooden cars and all different types and shapes and sizes. I was quite interested in the shape of the skip. As I walked forward to look inside I saw a vision of a different kind of island.

I hopped in to see if it was just my mind playing tricks on me. I put my arm through to see if it was real. My arm did eventually go through, go through to the island because I could felt he heat on my hand. It scared the living daylights out of me. What was going to happen to me?


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