By Hayley, 10

“YES” I said to myself, “I’ve won.” I had just learnt that I was going on holiday in a helicopter. I heard a sound like something roaring. It….was…. The helicopter. It was very cold here but I knew when I arrived there it would be scorching. In the helicopter I was so excited just like a child on Christmas day. The helicopter was black like a piece of coal. It was a long journey. I was half way there, I opened the window for some air. WHOOSH… I fell out. It was along way down I fell and I fell.


I was in the water. I swam as fast as a racing car. Soon I came to an island. What a holiday I am going to have.

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