The secret wish
By Theodore, 11

After a few hours, Louise started to moan about stomach pains and heatstroke. I thought “Can't she stop moaning for a second?” All of a sudden Lou saw some orang utangs she had made friends with earlier. They had brought some bananas with them.

Straight away after dinner, I said goodbye to Louise and Harry. Harry mumbled “good riddance”. I thought the same. With a puff of smoke and a clash of light, I was out of sight. As soon as I arrived home, I walked straight over to Harry's house, but on on the way there, I saw him.

"What happened to Louise?" Harry said.

"Never seen again," I replied.

That was the last thing we ever spoke to each other.

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