A Wonderful Island
By Sophie, 10
"Hey you lot,
look what I've found!" bellowed Declan. It was a green see-through
bottle covered in slime, as gruesome as a slug crawling across someone’s
Meanwhile Sophie and Tiffany
were sitting in a dark, dismal and dirty cave.
Suddenly, they shouted "We've
found an animal lying in a puddle of blood."
Emma explained "I have
an idea.What we can do is write with its blood on a leaf and put
it in the bottle to float (S.O.S)."
We all called out "We
all shall do that."
Then we built plan B, a
raft for us all, after we had found some wood.
When we had finished the
raft we all sat down and had a drink of water from the lake in the
middle of the island. Emma stayed on the island and waited for a
boat. Declan remembered about the surf board he had made.
Sophie and Tiffany set off
in the raft over the deep blue sea. Tiffany went to her house on
a train and Sophie walked it, it was only a few miles away. Sophie
was glad she was home and she said she was never going diving again.
We were all safe.