By James, 11

Me and Ben found a tree. We got Elliott to climb up for the palm leaves and sap. We took the sap and leaves and stuck them on the lilo with Sophie’s diving suit. Then we left it to dry, then Heather tied Sophie's diving suit legs and arms. We all got on the lilo and I pushed it off into the sea. We began our journey.

I fell off the lilo and drifted off. A boat came and I was pulled out of the water. The boat turned around and took me home. The boat took me to the shore and then I was taken to Nottingham.

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