By Harry, 10

I looked around, no more eagles. I searched frantically in my back pack for my laptop. I set it up and started the game again. Seeing the batteries were running low I had to be quick. Louise was moaning, Theo made a wish and they disappeared. Speedily diving forward I saw green. It was like an enormous salamander. As I fell through the matrix another, screen rushed up to meet me.

Suddenly I found myself in my own welcoming house. Back home. walking down the road one day I saw Theo.

"What happened to Louise?," I asked.

"Never seen again," he replied. That was the last time we talked to each other ever again.

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