Iomega
Crystal Springs Wing, Room 10

Iomega

Our monster’s name is Iomega. He has the sly shape of a bat. He is black with red claws, eyes and a red mouth. He always is very mad and is ready to kill. The yellow dots on his body represent poisonous darts that will shoot out and kill when he is disturbed. His eyes hypnotize you when you stare at him for more than one millli-second and he will overcome you with evil. His claws are red cold knives that will shred your body into pieces that could never be put back together. He flies by you and leaves a cold trail of disturbing, unknown thoughts of despair. He has a jagged point that will cut through even the strongest of castle walls.

Room #0

When I walked into the lobby the cobwebs started to stare at me straight in the face, they covered the ceiling. It was dim and dank. Suddenly a cold feeling came among me. There was no one in the room but me. There were tons of doors with no signs on them.

Iomega makes noises as soon as you walk into room #0. When it nears twilight Iomega stares you in the eye in a haunted way. As I felt the monster brush my leg I scrambled for the door that was closest within my grasp. As I reached for the knob Iomega slyly crawled into my path in front of me. He cast a spell and made it so that I could see through the door, I saw other monsters.
Suddenly everything stopped..............

From that night forward I heard an eerie moaning noise coming from the closet in my room. Sometimes it was so silent that I thought that I could hear shrieks from outside in the sheer black darkness. I had come upon a decision to check out of this monster motel. I was on my way downstairs when I passed the putrid grotesque quarters of the monster.

From that moment forward I had a strong disturbing feeling. Why did I enter.

Maggie+Mary, California, 12+11

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