Busy Beach
By Megan, 8
White horses paddling in the sea having great time, Beautiful dogs barking very lould running to get a stick, lovely green trees swaying in the breeze. (November 2004)
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Seasons
By Imogen, 10
Seasons change, all year round. People like summer, People like winter, Then there's people who like autumn and spring. I like summer, I like winter, I like ALL seasons. Why do we have seasons? Life would be SO MUCH easier. (November 2004)
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Cats Sleep Anywhere
By Stephen, 8
Cats sleep anywhere Under bushes, on my lap and on the roof. Resting on the pavement, after chasing its prey.
Cats eat anything. Chocolate hard to catch! Fish, slippery to catch! Tuna, if they can open it! And any prey they can eat! (November 2004)
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The Busy Beach
By Courtney, 8
Noisy people moving slowly for the scenery around them. Dogs running over the place Jumping over people sunbathing. Rock pools swaying in and out, People standing silently in the non-see-through water. (November 2004)
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Mr Cross
By Matthew, 8
Our head teacher's called Mr Cross His name suits his act He is ugly with a very long nose He'll cane you still and very hard too! He has such a deep voice that you can hear it in Australia (November 2004)
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Mr Fast
By Shaun, 8
A pot bellied dwarf is Mr Fast short at last and he's fast. He's 85 and slides. He has a shower, in there for a hour. He likes to lie and has 3 eyes. (November 2004)
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Mr Bigg
By Christopher, 8
Mr Bigg our teacher is so big He can touch the roof He is so strong He can dig a hole in under 2 minutes. When somebody is sent to him he is so short tempered They have to come to him straight away. He is so strong He can lift 10 children up at once. He is so scary He sneaks up on people And boos them until they give in. He comes at night and scares them in the light. He sweats 10 times a day. Mr Bigg is the silliest and the strongest person In the school. He HATES children. (November 2004)
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Mrs Lark
By Kathryn, 7
Mrs Lark is our teacher She walks past With out shoving She never runs fast. She is so beautiful Her voice is so sweet She is so polite No wonder she cooks the best meat. She never shouts But no one ever minds much She always makes us relax We love her like a mum Next year we will miss her so much. (October 2004)
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Pretty Beach
By Lydia, 9
Noisy children playing around, and using bread to catch crabs.
Water being skimmed like milk. One touch will send it rippling, rippling, rippling like a perfect sheet of silk. Every grain of sand is like a perfect piece of sun, slippin' in and out of toes and having lot's of fun!
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The Animal School
By Thomas, 8
There's a famous man, Called Mr. Geal, He can cook, A fantastic meal.
He has a pet, Which is a parrot, He named him Paul And he feeds him carrots.
He works in a school, By the London eye, The pigeons fly over him, And he waves back "Hi."
Until one day, He had little fear, He thought "Oh Paul I wish you were here."
But parrots are not Allowed in school, No dogs, no cats, Not even a mule.
So Mr. Geal, Had an idea, He'll bring lots of animals, All to here.
So Mr. Geal, With a torch of light, Found lots of animals, All through the night.
He found birds & frogs, Dogs & cats, Goats & monkeys, Mice & bats.
When the teacher, Then arrived, She did get, A shocking surprise.
There were animals, All around, Which Mr. Geal, Had already found.
The children were happy, And so was he, The children won't be bored, "Hee, Hee, Hee!!!!." (Oct 2004)
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Mr Hump
By Henry, 7
Have you met Mr Hump, He's got a hump on his back, He thinks it's a very new fashion, Every day he has a sack, Because if children have stuff during class He takes it from your very hand. At the end of the day You will have a big rash Because of him Your mother might think you were in a big bash Which'll be very unusual!
One strange day He grew very very Fat And then
and then he exploded everywhere And That's the end of that. (Oct 2004)
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Mrs Willett
By Emily, 7
Our teacher is Mrs Willett She is very cool, She has long gold silky hair, Long black shiny boots, Voice like A cat and skiny, Age 24 Cool black clothes She tells funny jokes She has a friend called Stuart, Silky hair She brings him to school some times That's my teacher Mrs Willett!!! (Oct 2004)
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Mr Cards
By Jake, 8
Mr Cards is tall, thin has Gold and silver teeth. He is a Headteacher to our school
He is a cool headteacher and he Hates lessons so he brings Pokemon cards to school for all of us
He looks like a pig and his Wife does too He has a baby And it is horrible
He also brings Gameboys and Gamecubes to play on in lesson times
He has died now, That is sad So we have to do lots of work
(Oct 2004)
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Mr. Cane
By Michael, 8
Mr.Cane Horrible strict with red frizzy hair He's like a bear! Really fat and small Actually Notthing to laugh at at all He always wears an eye patch Some people call him Mr.Match! He always lights a cigarette In the middle of class When he asked you a question The best thing to do is pass! And the worst thing of all is that Mr. Cane Can't fly a plane!!!!!!!!!! (Oct 2004)
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Cats Eat
By Philip, 8
Cats eat cat food By the gallon Cats eat Anything Cats eat fish Every day cats eat Anything Cats eat mice All the time cats eat Anything!!!!!!!!!! (Oct 2004)
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My Teacher is ..................
By Sarah, 8
My Teacher Is
. Mr. Elvis, he's very tall Sometimes even cool.
He's got a voice like thunder He's a superhero So he hovers like thunder.
He has a shiny suit With long black boots.
He has thick black locks And a girlfriend that wears frocks.
He's aged 21 But very young
And that's my teacher Mr. Elvis.
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Mr Kind the Caretaker
By Grace, 8
Mr Kind is very Funny and likes A good joke he Tries to be cool Even though he is.
He wears pirate shoes Big ears, green eyes And spikey hair too.
Mr Kind is very tall He is as tall as the Door he can always Find things.
He is always sharing Sweets with us and Not just sweets.
He loves his job he Is a really fast Cleaner and loves Fixing stuff. (October 2004)
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Class Poem
By Marc, 8
Lions roar Larks soar Bulls charge Goats barge Dolphins dive Hedgehogs hive Rabbits twith Horses itch Tigers stalk Parrots talk Eagles glide Slugs slide Monkeys natter Children chatter! (October 2004)
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Things Cats Do
By Cameron, 7
Cats yawn lazily Cats sleep purrily Cats pounce happily Cats bounce crazily Cats eat hungrily Cats play excitedly Cats stalk prowly Cats walk excitedly! (October 2004)
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My Cat's Called Sparky
By Meganw, 8
My cat's called Sparky He's a little bundle of fur My cat's called Sparky Hugs make him purr But To me he's my Sparky And he always will be. (October 2004)
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My Teacher
By Harry, 7
My teacher is called Mr No-Kane His voice is so high It sounds like a girl is screaming Our teacher is not very small In fact he is very tall He is very posh And he has a lot of dosh Our teacher is young And he reads things backwards like ku fung or beetle dung But I like my teacher He is a nice creature. (October 2004)
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Cats Dribble
By Michael, 8
Cats dribble anywhere - on your lap on the sofa on the car on the fence on your bike on the table even on the telly cable on the chair on the work top on the mat on the floor on the window sill on the book in the basket - anywhere will do they don't care a bit - anywhere they'll leave their spit! (October 2004)
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Busy Beach
By Francesca, 8
Barking dogs Wagging their tails Fetching a crumbly stick.
Wooden rowing boats Splashing out To the deep blue Sea.
Green trees Swishing high In the pale blue sky. (October 2004)
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Cats Eat Anything
By Thomas, 8
Cats eat anything they eat fish they eat birds cats eat rabbits cats eat mice cats eat cat food cats don't care what they eat because cats eat ANYTHING! (October 2004)
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The Strangest Beach
By Hattie, 7
Lively dogs running madly As if they were Kelly going for gold.
A blackest bird is flying Like a jumbo jet.
Oldest trees swooping Through the warmest breeze. (October 2004)
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