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 "Who am I?" from Brunei

Who am I?

By Sajil, 9

A golden glowing laptop
A sparkling blue lotus floating on water
A delicious squashy orange light like a sponge
A big intelligent and kind elephant
Hot and sunny day
A teeny weenie football with a small nose
A big train smoking fire
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Sandesh, 9

White and silver table shiny like a diamond
Yellow glowing flower swinging with the wind
A dragon blazing on the fire
A Leopard speed like a fighterjet
A thunder that distroy a planet
A gigantic football large as a sun
A rocket that can fly up to the sun
A beautiful country like a flower
A delicious food like ever taste
A melodious music like to hear all the time
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Pranay, 9

A golden glowing laptop
A sparkling blue lotus floating no water
A delicious squashy orange light like sponge
A big intelligent and kind elephant
Hot and sunny day
A teeny weenie football with a small nose
A big train smoking fire
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Bhawana, 9

A sparkly bright shiny lamp glowing in the dark
A beautiful red rose with lots of soft petals
A green juicy crunchy delicious apple
A roaring angry and hungry tiger
A dark creepy night with lots of bats
The superlative badminton racquet in the whole wide world
A speed car with many designs and super
A special Singapore with house
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Sunita , 9

A golden glowing laptop
A sparkling blue lotus floating on water
A delicious squashy orange light like sponge
A big intelligent and kind elephant
Hot and sunny day
A teeny weenie football with a small nose
A big train smoking fire
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Darshan, 9

A big cuddly soft cushion
A shining talk rose
A delicious golden sweet banana
A loud roar that a lion makes you run as fast as you can
A morning like a desert heat
A famous Barcelona t-shirt which makes you lucky
A cool flaming amazing speed motorbike that's awesome
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Limsha, 9

A soft, furry armchair parked in the corner
A bright, red rose dancing with the wind
A big, shiny juicy apple hanging from a tree
A small, furry, soft bunny
A warm early morning
A large, colourful bouncing castle
A glossy, silver speedy sport car
The rolling hills of England
A rock and roll band
A loud noisy drum
A hot and spicy chicken tikka masala
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Rowan , 10

A white iron hard shiny TV
A spiky glowing rose in a magical cloth
A juicy orange a colour heated fruit
A roaring fierce lion with a split tooth
A freezing snowing blizzard in a watery tree
A talking bouncing ball in a basketball game
A mega twisting car with a broken pair
A spinning thunder storm in Afghanistan
A hip pop rocking drumstick
A shanking soft voice in a guitar
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Praja, 9

A tall brown squashy chair lying in the hall
A pink glamorous frangipani dancing with the ball
A yellow delicious zesty lemon waiting to be plucked
A blind brown monkey bounding through the trees
A dangerous creepy dinosaur in midnight
A running super genius that wins every single race
A diamond piano playing by itself
A freezing cold snowy North pole
(May 2007)




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Who am I?

By Rhiannon, 8

A scary clock always knowing the time
A jiggy red spiky leaf
A dazzling dragon fruit ready to squirt
Leaping as an exciting cheetah
A whopping loud golden trumpet.
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Sangam, 9

A golden glowing laptop.
A sparkling blue lotus floating on water.
A delicious squashy orange light sponge.
A big intelligent and kind elephant.
Hot and sunny day.
A tiny football with a small nose.
A big train smoking fire.
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Ben, 9

A stiff wooden bench
A humugously tall water lilly
A bright green apple, ever so sharp to bite
A sloth bear with tremendous claws
A dark stormy night trying to destroy anything in its path
A tough, hard, dirty rugby pole
A laid back 15000cc Harley Davidson
A freezing Iceland, minus 80 degrees celsius
A mad pop taken from a classical composer
A loud ear-splitting trombone playing in a band
A hot 'carly' chicken curry with a terrific smell
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Anjuli, 9

A freezing cold metal iron,
A red rose smooth
A yellow bright juicy mango,
A beautiful wild roaring lion,
A sparkly night scarier and beautiful as a swan,
A swimming star genius that wins every single
race,
A fast motorbike flying sonic speed incredibly!
In Singapore the dancing colorful water musical
fountain!
A rock n roll disco song all mixed together.
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Jazmine, 8

A big blue sofa as soft as polar bear's fur.
A cold seed trying to sprout on a winter's morning.
A bright raisin in the daylight.
A roaring lion pouncing from side, looking for food.
An evening colder than pure snow.
The worlds greatest football always scoring a goal.
A limousine trying to turn the corner.
The country side hills green like you never imagined.
An ocarina playing softly in the dark of night.
A piece of celery growing as tall as a giant.
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Kristian, 9

A big orange sofa full of fur
A little seed dashing out of the ground, evolving into a
daffodil
A juicy sweet strawberry
A big brown horse with a floppy tail
An orange sunset in the afternoon
A swimming pool full of blue water
A black Mercedes driving fast
A hot Philippine island floating in the sea
A piano softly playing in the dark
A soft juicy cucumber
(May 2007)

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Who am I?

By Millie, 9

Fluffy, cuddly, chocolate brown sofa
Beautiful white morning glory
Big red crunchy apple
Black, cute bunny, jumping in the grass
Fresh, blue-skied bright morning
Hip hoppy blue dancer
Bumpy jumpy fast road vehicle
England, the best in the world
He's slow and smooth like a retro pop song
Loud like a big blue drum set
Lovely mashed potato covered in gravy.
(May 2007)

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09-Jul-2011