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  Fire Poems from Belthorn

From Lancashire, UK, February 2011

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Fire

By Tyler H, Year 2

The fire is in the park
And is very dark.
This fire in the park
In the dark
it's very hot
and it is red.
February 2011

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Fire

By Tilly, Year 2

Fire, fire is hot like a pot
It's like a firework has dust set off
It's very very dangerous don't go near it
or it might give you a shock.
February 2011

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Fire

By Sammy, Year 2/3

On Friday there was a house fire
In my house, house
With my mouse

The fire got higher and higher
The house was full of smoke
It had lots of flames

My mouse ran out the of house
I ran with her
We ran and ran
February 2011

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Fire

By Sam, Year 2

The four firemen fought the fire
Flickering flames fly from the fire
February 2011

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Fire

By Saffa, Year 2

Fire, fire flickering flames
Bursting into the sky
Flicker flicker bing bong bang!
Getting higher and higher
All through the night.

Fireworks go BANG!
All through the night
Getting higher and higher into the sky
Flicker flacker bing bong bang!
Flames bursting into the sky
Getting higher and higher.
February 2011

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Fire

By Lucas, Year 2

Camp fire, camp fire
Hope you light
Camp fire, camp fire
Glow in the night
Camp fire, camp fire
What a beautiful site
Hope you grow, see
You tonight

Camp fire, camp fire
Hope you stay
Camp fire, camp
Hooray hooray

Camp fire, camp fire
You are bright
Camp fire, camp fire
Day and night
February 2011

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Fire

By Kieran, Year 2

Fire is HOT, hot ,hot,
Lighting up the night
I hope you stay lighting up
So you can stay tonight
I hope you stay I have more wood
Just so you can stay
February 2011

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Fire

By Megan, Year 2

There was a forest fire
As small as a dot in a pot
And as soon as it spread
It goes out instead

Firework, firework in the sky
Firework, firework in the sky
Bank! Bang! Bang! They will scare you away.
February 2011

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Fire

By Jamie, Year 2

House fires, house fires
Are very hot
House fires, house fires
Are in a pot

It was bonfire night
It gave me a fright
The fireworks sparked
and it was very dark
fireworks, fireworks
isn't it bright
fireworks, fireworks
I love you in the night
February 2011

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Fire

By James, Year 2

Fire, fire, burning tyre
Keep us warm in the night
Fire, fire, hot, hot, hot!
Burning like a northern light
Camp fire camp fire burning hot like a northern light
February 2011

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Fire

By Georgie, Year 2

Log fires are hot.
Are very, very hot.
Log fires do not go out
You keep us warm a lot.
February 2011

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Fire

By Jakub, Year 2

Camp fire, camp fire cook on hot
Camp fire, camp fire burn a lot.
February 2011

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Fire

By Jake, Year 2

Fire is hot
Boiling water in the pot
Fire is red
Keeps you warm in bed!
February 2011

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Camp fire

By Jacob, Year 2

In camp we had a camp fire and I cooked a fish over the camp fire
And we ate it all up and after it was night time everyone said
Goodnight and I went to sleep
In camp we had a fire and it burnt a tyre and I saw a flier
And the fire men burned down the flickering fire and we all said
Hurray to the fire
February 2011

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Fire

By Isobel, Year 2

Firework, firework boom in the sky
Show your fire in the sky!
Firework, firework don't go away
Don't, don't I want you to stay!
Firework light in the night!
I like the night but I need some light!
Thank you, thank you now I can see
I can see in the very dark night!
Firework thank you for the light
Now it's lovely and shining bright!
The night Is bright
but I need some light
in the very dark night!
Oh calm down your frightening me with your
BOOM! BANG! and SHINE!
February 2011

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Fire

By Imogen, Year 2

The fire was hot and very dangerous
Flickering orange flames are very hot and dangerous
February 2011

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Fire

By Gabe, Year 2

Sitting round the camp fire
Watching flames getting higher and higher
Crackle, crackle big red sparks
Disappearing in the dark
In the morning just burning embers
But what a fire did we remember
February 2011

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Fire

By Frankie, Year 2

Fireworks, fireworks, I hope you stay
I really love you night and day
Fireworks, fireworks, I hope you fright
Fire in to my height
Fireworks I hope you love it
Danger, danger, there's a fire in my house
February 2011

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Fire

By Ethan, Year 2

Danger, danger, there is a forest fire
But look there is something¬Ö look it's a helicopter
It was red, yellow and blue
It grew close to the fire
February 2011

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Fireworks

By Emily, Year 2

Colourful fireworks
Fireworks, fireworks go up in the sky
With a bang! Bang!
Colourful fireworks
February 2011

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Fire

By Ellie J, Year 2

House fires are hot and dangerous
House fires are very, very hot
House fires are big
House fires burn a lot

Fires, fires, burning bright
Flickering flames all through the night
Red, orange and yellow
Make the colours of fire
February 2011

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Forest fire

By Ellie C, Year 2

On Friday there was a flier
About a forest fire
And it started to spread
Through the forest and flames
Spreading everywhere
It rose higher and higher
And a house was full of flames
Fire engines came to the forest
They all ran away and everyone was scared
Because it puffed out of the forest
And into the city
People were in bed
They woke up and ran, ran, ran
Some people ran so far they
Stopped at a restaurant
And had something to eat
February 2011
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Log Fire

By Bob, Year 2

The fire is hot, fire is dangerous
Flickering flames are very dangerous
But one day in a house
There was a mouse
The log fire has logs in a fire
And that is why it's called a log fire
February 2011

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Fire

By Tyler, Year 2

The fire is burning bright it is like a sun
It's bright flames are bright and orange and hot
February 2011

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Firern

By Ben, Year 2

A racing fire it was very hot
It burnt my toys I was very cross.
A wiggling fire it was dancing in the wind
The wood was burning on the mountain
The snow was melting.
February 2011

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